This one I'd say would've felt more natural when focused on the larger piece of iron, and not on the ball in the right front. Reasonably happy though with overall composition of this particular subject, but I'll really need to shape up my decisionmaking about focus.
The second one is better than the first. Why? I'd say the second one is subtler, by showing less of the ramp in the left front corner. More of an illusion of a repoussoir than a big fat triangle.
Subtler = better here.
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